J. Haux

Chapter Four “My mother is going to kill me, just so you know,” he announced to Landon and Max as he rolled down the window. “ Dead. She told me ...

Psht! Wouldn't discourage me...but you're doing the right thing. I think the weakest chapter is the second. I like the others a lot. Whoops. I forgot to quote.

Yeah. Sure . ( :^o ) :wink: I'm glad, Bubble. Oh! So you CAN brutally edit your story, if you've written it. :wink: I enjoyed it. ~Jacquie~

Recomendo que Daphne va por un lago y encontra un cisne. Esto es mi opinión. ¡Ah ah! ¡Usted es chistoso, Griffinkeeper!

Also (sorry for getting off subject) Maybe he/she isn't really twenty-some years old. (But at any rate, it was probably written by a twelve-year-old.) Every time I update my profile, ...

Oh, I think it's the right forum. Fantasy/Science fiction, either or.

Haven't read a whole lot-I'll come back later. A little too wordy sometimes. One of my own greatest faults...Well, I'll elaborate later. Can't reply now!